Before & After: Banks

Mike Serpa

Lt. Colonel
Joined
Jan 24, 2013
Nathaniel P. Banks - LOC photo
x03244v.jpg

03244v.jpg

His hair gave me the biggest problem. I probably cropped too much of the bottom of this photo.
 
Nathaniel P. Banks - LOC photo
View attachment 195045
View attachment 195047
His hair gave me the biggest problem. I probably cropped too much of the bottom of this photo.
Mike, I think you did a great job overall. As an old art director, I will agree that you cropped a little too much off the bottom. It will be less distracting if you leave the hands completely in, or take them completely out. Of course, the hands are very much a part of the energy and personality he conveys in this pose, so I don't think you should lose them. If you made an intermediate copy, prior to cropping, I recommend you go back and crop just below his lowest hand. Then crop some of the top off--maybe about halfway between the current margin and the top of his head. Try that and see how you like it. Good luck with it!

Patrick
 
Mike, I think you did a great job overall. As an old art director, I will agree that you cropped a little too much off the bottom. It will be less distracting if you leave the hands completely in, or take them completely out. Of course, the hands are very much a part of the energy and personality he conveys in this pose, so I don't think you should lose them. If you made an intermediate copy, prior to cropping, I recommend you go back and crop just below his lowest hand. Then crop some of the top off--maybe about halfway between the current margin and the top of his head. Try that and see how you like it. Good luck with it!

Patrick
No, I didn't save anything. Only the final. I didn't want to spend the time to clean up the horizontal line going across the bottom. Getting lazy.

Goodness his photo has been torn apart. Well not much considering Nathaniel P Banks awful military track record.
It's a broken glass slide. It's not unusual to see these with big pieces missing or a crack or two running completely across the photo.
 
No, I didn't save anything. Only the final. I didn't want to spend the time to clean up the horizontal line going across the bottom. Getting lazy.


It's a broken glass slide. It's not unusual to see these with big pieces missing or a crack or two running completely across the photo.
Thanks for the info, I know that Banks was a terrible general (he was a political general) as shown by his failure at stopping Jackson at Shenandoah or plotting a sucessful naval invasion along the Red River.
 
It's one of the better photos of Banks, IMO, seems to be more ' real ' than so many of his others. It's so worth saving, thank you, Mike- agree with our art director although am happy to see the image looking so good.

Have softened a lot on our men like Banks. They all got on horses, left families, risked death for something they believed in and ( with some exceptions ) did their best, as they knew it. Couldn't all have been for ego, even the ever oleaginous Sickles. This portrait seems to capture a sincere Banks, who saw way too much.
 

Learn About Us
About CivilWarTalk
Contact the Webmaster
Meet the Staff
Link to CivilWarTalk
Join Our Community
Register
Browse Forums
View Today's Discussions
Search the Forum
Get Help
FAQ
Student Guide
Forum Rules & Etiquette
Copyright / DMCA

     Contact Us CivilwarTalk on Facebook CivilWarTalk on YouTube CivilWarTalk on Twitter RSS Feed

Bringing the American Civil War and More to Life.
© 1999 - , CIVILWARTALK, LLC - Site Version 10.0

SlaveryTalk.com - SecessionTalk.com - CivilWarTalk.com - ReconstructionTalk.com
Back
Top